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| Dragonflame-05 2006-07-31 ch 1, | Hey this was a good one. Liked it. |
| Anonymous 2006-07-27 ch 1, | This was nice to read. Well written. |
| Great-Enchantress 2006-07-20 ch 1, | Wow this sounds is a very good story, I love how descriptive it is and how it is being told by the eyes of a young child. That way it doesn't sound at all prejudiced or biased, it's just honest and blunt. Very good job, I think my favorite part was when Emily thought someone was the president and he really wasn't, that was cute. Oh, and is this a personal narrative or just a story that you thought of? Just wondering... Either way this was great. -Great-Enchantress |