why is this mature?

HI i like this one is short and... well theres just something about it.
I liked it xx

It felt, weird, as if it were missing something.

I think it needed more details.

Nice piece.

I'm a huge AFI fan and I saw the title and thought, hmm...

Finally, something good on fictionpress.You don't know how long I've been looking for something like this. Thanks for being an awesome writer.

Now, this makes me happy. Because I really think stories should be written based on du. Hell, there should be a whole book based on it because I think it tells a story. Anyway, I find that this, oddly, fills me with that warm and fuzzy feeling. Good job.

wow, that was really good. what would be even better is if u put it in poem form.

Very interesting story. It's crazy because I was listening to that song when I found your story. Kiss and Control (your story, not the song) seems impersonal or uncaring because it states no names and it's in third person. Yet it seems very personal and caring when you put it all together and understand it. I loved it, personally.