I liked the story but I felt you could have improved it by using better diction and syntax. It was still a good read and I thought that it turned out well in the end :D

I liked how you started off this story! It wasn't like most other beginnings and I can't wait to see how it turns out :)

Sorry I didn't review each chapter, but I just could stop reading long enough to review...

I'm really glad that I'm finally reading a story from an Australian author. I'm actually quite sick of reading American stories!! Cause I actually get the slang.

I laughed so hard in many of the chapter... It as an excellent story and im looking forward to reading others

TG
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nice.

love this story and the angst involved, especially the happy ending!

Sweet story, I really like it. Jared is so sweet.

very sweet and well written!
charlotte

wow I can't believe she's pregnant!

aww, they should talk about it but considering what happened it's way to awkward.

She so has feelings for him and he does to. They should just accept it and be together.

i love this story!!
its so cute =)

hahaha!
i love it!
very funny!

that was the best ending ever! omigosh! i loved loved loved your story! keep on keepin' on!

Totally amazing story. It was remarkably well-written, and the plot was fantastic. Muy Bien.

Wonderful read. Just a bit fast-paced. You could have dramatized it more. :D But all in all it was good :)