Another cool chapter, but your chapters are on the short side... Its definately an original story and one that i want to read more of :)

Oh exciting how will this "Mark" come into the story? Tate just seems so secretive and mysterious. Update soon.

huh. now i wasn't expecting that. poor alan - bitten when he's just minding his own business... this should be interesting

This was a really interestig chap...it seems Tate is up to something. Update soon because this rocks

WOw..so whos is it? Whats going on!..Update soon!

I just thought about it now but your vamp has no supernatural powers that you've let on to. I like that. It makes him more of a person and not a vamp that just happens to talk. Update soon.

I'm loving the characters, esp Tate. I can't wait to see how main char(i forgot his name) finds his maker.

I love the characters so far. Not much story but your writing style is very appealing

wow this story is really good. I love a good story about vampires (and between you and me its really hard to find a good one without searching for hours) I'm adding this one to my favs

hey...this story is definately not like anything I've ever read before...and in an awesome way...keep it up...

rea

I like this story alot, but i think it would have been better if you described things a bit more, i mean its a good read, but its not compelling, you know what i mean? You really can't get into it that well, but thats just my opinion. Its a good story i hope you update i would love to know where its going.

-Saleinaenachiya