omfg this is amazing! lust is great: hoping she hits the button that presses on 'love'. wish it were that simple, eh.

greed: even if it means nosebleeds.. phwoar.

pride: lovers at midnight morning.. hmm. beautiful thought (:

sloth: black eats her insides.. does that mean emo? lol i don't know.

are the words joined together to retain the format of the stanzas? i think this is a really yummy poem though.

umm, i love it?

my favorite sins that you describes would be envy: 'she bites down so hard' what a thing people do that i have never read in poetry! everyone clenches their teeth when their angry/envious. i loved the imagery you created--'and hits liquid hard'

oh alcohol. that solves so many many problems.

anger was another good one. just love the pain described--it being anybody's fault because he's there.

and of course lust is another perfect one. how many girls think that just by 'doing it' he'll love them.

love is too complicated and always confused with lust. (damn it!)

all in all beautiful.