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synapse collapse 2006-07-20 . chapter 1
"we'realljustliesbuiltonspindlylimbs"

That's a beautiful line. Lovely. :)
i am pookie 2006-07-20 . chapter 1
ah...'lies built on spindly limbs'how true. lies can easy crash around us in more of a disaster than if we were to tell the truth.

love the lines: 'and as i gasp back/ he is my everything/ we both pause a moment'

two lies and you both know it, but won't say it, will just ride with it.

love the 'maybe it's intergestion' as you try to ignore the obvious truth of the lie.

great, great poem (all your poems are very good)
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