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i am pookie 2006-07-20 . chapter 1
this poem is short, but in it (the imagery and such) i love it.

i love the lines: 'knowing i'm making up secrets just/ to keep in the same league as you'

'we're all lies'what a powerful line.

i feel like taking a step back and looking myself over. physical qualities can be a lie? it makes sense, scary sense.

i really really loved this poem.
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