Er...I think you might mean coincidence, not "Quintessence" but I could be wrong...

hmm...quite intriging...keep writing.

A clone! Now I'm really getting physched up!

We all know he's not going to die- yet because that would make a very short and unfulfilling story...So how are you going to continue? I love the twists you keep putting in the end.

Would love to hear the twins' names. They sound like intriguing characters.

Couldn't you have chosen a better name than Jack London? The story is pretty interesting though.

Wicked beginning. Would like to know what it's all about!

Um... I may not know the meaning of the word "Quintessence" but I do know it doesn't fit your purpose. Sorry, had to get that off my chest.

You pulled off a very strong beginning with this one. Add in a couple subtle hints about their appearance, Alex and Jack's,