Reviews for Dragon Brother - FictionPress.com

vampy08 2006-07-31 ch 1,	I thought it was cute, Hey could you check out the new chapter to Soccer Romance, nobody has and it's kinda hurting my feelings..lol
Jared DeVries 2006-07-27 ch 5,	WOW. I like this story. There are some things that could do with fixing, like the excessive use of names.. but those are very easily corrected by addings "Hes" and "Shes" Great story, cant wait to read more.
StaticX4 2006-07-24 ch 5,	I'm still lovin' this story you guys! You've kept my interest through this and of course I'll keep reading it! Thanks btw (about my story) ^_^ You make me so happy! Please write more!!
Coup 2006-07-22 ch 1,	"He turned back around"If he turned "back" and yet "around" again, he would be in the exact same position he started to "turned back around". I think a "turned back" or a "turned around" is sufficient.
PigeonKitty 2006-07-20 ch 2,	Oh wow congrats! It looks like you share the same writing ability as your sister. (I also loved the fact that you used the name Chiyo. ;) ) I encourage you to write longer chapters and more of the story. It's a great start! -Katie aka Kitty-
StaticX4 2006-07-20 ch 1,	It's a very good start. I encourage your brother to keep adding more to this becuase I like it already ^_^