"tried to find the real color of his eyes" -- I'm loving that line right now. Take care.

oh my! wow! this is so clever! i'm so moved...
you did a super awesome job!
and pls do review some of my poems if you have the time...

truly yours...

This is really good- It's short but very descriptive and takes you in. I like how you placed the line breaks and stanzas.

you always expressed yourself so well... never really understood how you always had me in awe...

I love the title, and your explanation of it just made it like a thousand times better. :D Trying to find the real color of his eyes? That is fabulous. Great work. Keep writing! :)

nice..

This poem is perfect. Let's say reading it felt like getting struck by lightning - in that more wonderful, surprising way.

holy. very nice

Very lyrical and descriptive. Sets the situation well, and leaves the reader thinking. Excellent work.

oh very pretty. nice. love the ending. awesome to see that you've updated again, rei! keep writing!

(hearts) katt

this was so pretty. so nice. i like it.

Such an interesting twist and metaphor at the end. Lovely stuff.

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