Hey! Me again! Great chapter, I'm so glad that you've started writing stories, but I wonder why you've left me at a bloody cliffhanger! Really want to read more soon. Your descriptions always are so perfect.

xoxo

Hilmary-Oceans

now this is real work of art, with words.

nice, i guess you were in a bad mood when you wrote that, weren't you? but still, i liked it, cuz it's quite unique...nothing like the poems i read so far...