I agree.

not bad. BTW, I don't need help.

I agree.

Your technique is not very fluid and it’s reasonably irregular and obscure. Though I do admire the simplicity.

[Agadinmar ]

if only i could get everyone i know to read this poem. then maybe school wouldn't be so much of a hell-hole, and people would learn to watch what they say.

Very true. Very good. Keep it up!

Great realization-poem of an ironic saying parents used to teach you as a kid . . . my only request is that you rate this higher than K or edit out the 'bull shit' and keep it the same rating. Anyways, nicely said. Keep writing, s.