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JaNde 2006-11-06 . chapter 1
Wow. Is it just me, or has your writing style changed a bit? XD
YES, IT'S ME~ Don't remember me? I'm crushed. *waves* if you do, hello, been a while, eh? This had an interesting feel. Trying to get used to the style though. When I do, I'm sure I'll be in love with your poems again *salutes* be sure to check out my new poem - i'm checking out yours XD. over and out.
wildwolffree17 2006-08-24 . chapter 1
Beautiful.
Aquafied 2006-08-07 . chapter 1
i think it would have been funnier to say"oh no"
Recovery From Death 2006-08-01 . chapter 1
I love this.

You paint such a lovely picture with your words.

My favorite lines are the last two. Somehow it is just the perfect ending to the rest of the piece. You go on about how gorgeous she is and then seem to sum it all up by answering your own question. Love it. Love it. Love it.
empathic life 2006-07-29 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I like the ending especially. Thanks for the review. -EL
fallin4ualwayz 2006-07-28 . chapter 1
love it!
Dale Christopher 2006-07-23 . chapter 1
I love the imagery in this, but the poetry itself was quite good too. I love the "quotes" too. Beautiful.Daze
Voi Voi 2006-07-23 . chapter 1
the quotes are a nice touch i must say.
breezy nostrils 2006-07-23 . chapter 1
pretty imagery. i love the way that you set this poem out. nice work.
mindOFdeliriousUNREST 2006-07-21 . chapter 1
great imagery and poetry, wrapped into one. this is a beautiful piece. it almost sounds like it's describing someone other than the title would lead us to believe... or i'm just dillusional.
Moondog Dozier 2006-07-20 . chapter 1
The tone in this works wonderfully. Part reverence and part awe. Specific portrait painted really enhances the relatability. Marvelous imagery. Good work.
anewcreatureinchrist 2006-07-20 . chapter 1
Its really pretty and short.
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