 JaNde 2006-11-06 . chapter 1Wow. Is it just me, or has your writing style changed a bit? XD
YES, IT'S ME~ Don't remember me? I'm crushed. *waves* if you do, hello, been a while, eh? This had an interesting feel. Trying to get used to the style though. When I do, I'm sure I'll be in love with your poems again *salutes* be sure to check out my new poem - i'm checking out yours XD. over and out. |
 wildwolffree17 2006-08-24 . chapter 1Beautiful. |
 Aquafied 2006-08-07 . chapter 1i think it would have been funnier to say"oh no" |
 Recovery From Death 2006-08-01 . chapter 1I love this.
You paint such a lovely picture with your words.
My favorite lines are the last two. Somehow it is just the perfect ending to the rest of the piece. You go on about how gorgeous she is and then seem to sum it all up by answering your own question. Love it. Love it. Love it. |
 empathic life 2006-07-29 . chapter 1Beautiful. I like the ending especially. Thanks for the review. -EL |
 fallin4ualwayz 2006-07-28 . chapter 1love it! |
 Dale Christopher 2006-07-23 . chapter 1I love the imagery in this, but the poetry itself was quite good too. I love the "quotes" too. Beautiful.Daze |
 Voi Voi 2006-07-23 . chapter 1the quotes are a nice touch i must say. |
 breezy nostrils 2006-07-23 . chapter 1pretty imagery. i love the way that you set this poem out. nice work. |
 mindOFdeliriousUNREST 2006-07-21 . chapter 1great imagery and poetry, wrapped into one. this is a beautiful piece. it almost sounds like it's describing someone other than the title would lead us to believe... or i'm just dillusional. |
 Moondog Dozier 2006-07-20 . chapter 1The tone in this works wonderfully. Part reverence and part awe. Specific portrait painted really enhances the relatability. Marvelous imagery. Good work. |
 anewcreatureinchrist 2006-07-20 . chapter 1Its really pretty and short. |