Once again nice job. It is so true!

oh I like this...secrets in the tapestry...makes me think...an idea I never wouldve thought to write about..."Fall back to remember all that was lost"

Awesome idea. great title, it really grabbed me.

~the Stranger in the moonlight~

very interesting. the message is so suttle that you can miss it if you are in a haste, which to poem speaks against clearly. i really liked reading this.

Reminds me of something, but I really love it...

i absolutely love this. so..well, random. great word choice. love the title to death. keep it up :)

OO...i loved your wording in this, and the title is so good 2. This was a great poem, i shall read more of ur stuff. Keep it up^_^

like it. reminds me of harry potter...

Short, to the point, but very beautiful. i love it. i dislike the flow of the poem, but maybe that's just me. Overall, I really like it.~Rowan~

the end line really added a kind of resonance to this.. I liked that a lot...

good job.

Great work, I like it. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

A very interesting poem, I like it. Your rhyme scheme however is off, but that hardly matters. I don't use a lot of rhyme myself. Either way, an excellent poem. Keep up the good work!

~Nyght

This was lovely. It truly was. I relly enjoyed the word choice :)

Keep writing.

pretty. i like it! short poems are refreshing to read

~dragonzz~

A wonderful and refreshing poem to read. The imagery is great! Well done.