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| Teddy Geiger 2006-11-15 ch 1,  | abuseOnce again nice job. It is so true! |
| ten pts above average 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abuseoh I like this...secrets in the tapestry...makes me think...an idea I never wouldve thought to write about..."Fall back to remember all that was lost" |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseAwesome idea. great title, it really grabbed me. ~the Stranger in the moonlight~ |
| master gorbadoc 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abusevery interesting. the message is so suttle that you can miss it if you are in a haste, which to poem speaks against clearly. i really liked reading this. |
| Guess 2006-09-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseReminds me of something, but I really love it... |
| Kiera B 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abusei absolutely love this. so..well, random. great word choice. love the title to death. keep it up :) |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseOO...i loved your wording in this, and the title is so good 2. This was a great poem, i shall read more of ur stuff. Keep it up^_^ |
| Leaving Here 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuselike it. reminds me of harry potter... |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuseShort, to the point, but very beautiful. i love it. i dislike the flow of the poem, but maybe that's just me. Overall, I really like it.~Rowan~ |
| tsarevich alexei 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abusethe end line really added a kind of resonance to this.. I liked that a lot... good job. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat work, I like it. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Completely Incomplete 2006-08-03 ch 1, | abuseA very interesting poem, I like it. Your rhyme scheme however is off, but that hardly matters. I don't use a lot of rhyme myself. Either way, an excellent poem. Keep up the good work! ~Nyght |
| AIAK 2006-07-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was lovely. It truly was. I relly enjoyed the word choice :) Keep writing. |
| Dragonzz 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abusepretty. i like it! short poems are refreshing to read ~dragonzz~ |
| Anaare 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseA wonderful and refreshing poem to read. The imagery is great! Well done. |