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| Amindaya 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abusePshht. You suck at writing? Whoa, sure fooled me. I wouldn't have read all your stories if you sucked...so you don't. I loved the way you described her; I could really visualize her, just PERFECTLY. Makes me want to go draw her now. ^^ |
| Kakyou Takashiro 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abuseah, it's truly been a while since i've read frost. for shame. haha. actually i think the first of frost's poems i've read was stopping by the woods on a snowy evening. and surely ou've adapted the talent of imagery. i could say that even for a one-shot this is a little short - and so i'm looking forward to other manga works by you - expecting less. you show a lot of promise - and this was truly a delightful read - and give me some confidence that i can still find good reads on fictionpress, as well makes me rather frustrated that i didn't get to your work sooner. with miles to go before i sleep. ^^ expecting nothing less from more of your works. kakyou |
| Murasaki 1/2 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abuseNice. I like the quote at the beginning it gets the reader ready for the story but setting up the tone. That was an easyy read. Not too long, not too short; I have a tendency to make things too long ^_^(). Not too much exposition. One thing you might wanna watch for is comma splices. |