|Reviews for Time and Fate|
| smile for the sunshine 12/26/07 . chapter 1
creative. i kinda like this.
the rhythm and rhyme of the piece was well done.
good work. )
| Elizabeth Sharp 9/8/07 . chapter 1
I really like it... You pant a cool picture. VEry good word flow. Paul Simon would be proud! :D
| tearing hands 9/8/07 . chapter 1
Wow. The rythm in this is absolutely stunning. You make rhyming seem so easy. It reminds me a little of a little kids' nursery rhyme, but with deeper meaning. Amazing.
| gardenofwords 8/28/07 . chapter 1
I love this! It flows beautifully. D
| Nathron 8/8/06 . chapter 1
Of course, my very favoritest poem evver! yep yep, your amazing. I want more poems! -chuckles greadily- muahaha...
jk. Kudos! :-)
| SV 7/21/06 . chapter 1
Haha, I like the flow of it. You might want to add on some more, cuz there's definitely room for it.