ok. in love with this chapter because:

PETER/BONOPOD!

BELLE AND SEBASTIAN! ♥

the snitty girls. so priceless. this story's awesome, but you know what it's missing? me! no, i'm kidding. it's cool as it is, because i'm trying to figure out who's who (with all these fake names flying around) and what's real and not real (looks devious). keep it up, me friend!

honorata

you captured the usual first day pretty well. i want to see where this story goes. keep it up (:

you know, the protagonist sounds a lot like me. i can go absolutely nuts with certain people and absolutely 'this' or 'that' way with others, and i really feel so fake after it ): also i have an awesomely sarcastic tongue when i want to. -.-

anyway this isn't about me, it's about you! haha. and this story is interesting. the last line was cheeky. lol.

okay, i'm reviewing as i go along, because for one, this chapter involves the first day of high school, and i'm interested to see how yours went in comparison to mine (i'll share the story later...).

first period with allison?!?! you lucky **. you have way more going for you on that day than i did. must read on and get over that fact. so unfair, though!

oh, i hate those friends! those neighbor people that one day all of a sudden stop talking to you because they're too cool...eh, they'll get it in the end though...(smiles evilly).

SHALY!! i wonder how she's doing, haven't heard from her in a while.

"one down, couple hundred left to go." i hear that. ick, school.

NICHOLAS! no, you're not biased, he's a cutie patootie.

yeah, how DID you end up unspoiled? you're a phenomenon my friend! though, i do know some not-only-children who are quite spoiled, so perhaps that is only a stereotype...

great chapter! i still don't know if there was any fiction in there, though it's really late and i can't fall asleep and i'm slightly on the delirious side, so then again i could have missed the paragraph in which you ride home from school on your flying horse, and have to climb over the wall of your castle to get inside, because the remote to bring down the moat was broken. so yeah, good stuff. i'm glad you're doing this, it's very interesting. i'll shut up now.

honorata

YEAH! Yippee, huzzah, wahoo! I'd "woot" but as you know, I'm not a "woot"ing person. You have FICTION up here! yeah yeah yeah! All right, I'm done, I'll shut up for now and inform you that this was a very well done introduction, and I especially enjoyed the jabs at CBSD and the reference to espresso beans. I'm intrigued; mixing fiction and reality is always a fascinating thing. I hope I'll be able to pick out the fiction from the otherwise (I'd better). And I'll be watching for more.

yours, etc.

honorata