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| Providance 2007-04-10 ch 7,  | abuseI love this story and I hope you decided to continue it. That would be amazing. So please continue...because its an amazing story |
| roflcopter 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseokay, okay, I'm reviewing. Update =( I've been waiting for months! I love this story. so cute!! |
| Fei 2006-08-10 ch 5, anon. | abuseI like so far. Can't wait for more. Great characters - Jay-Jay is so not straight. I had a friend named Jacob in high school (we called him Jay-Jay too) and he kind of reminds me of this Jay Jay - he had a girlfriend but he acted with me like this Jay Jay acts with Dar. Anyway sorry for that - Love the story. |
| roflcopter 2006-08-02 ch 4, | abuseJay-jay... what an idiot. Anyways. Great chapter, great story. Please update! |
| City Lights Burn Like Stars 2006-07-28 ch 3, | abusei like it i love it i want some more of it XD update soon |
| Death's Release 2006-07-28 ch 3, | abuseAm I seriously the only one who is reviewing this? Shame...I LOVE this story! It's VERY well written and thought out, and the characters are funny and realistic. I LOVE how close Jay-Jay and Dar are. Sitting in his lap...aw! So CUTE! LOVE it! Keep up the amazing work, and I'll see ya next chapter! |
| Death's Release 2006-07-27 ch 2, | abuseHey, good story! Seriously, I love how it's goin' so far...think Dar's probably my favoritre character as of now...the part with the stairs in the begining of chapter 1 was hilarious! Hmm...Dar and Jay-Jay seem to have a rather...'close' relationship. LOL! Please update soon! I can't wait for more! |