Hi. Well that was beautiful. I COULD NEVER make a song like that. Trust me I've tried. But you wrote a great song, Good Job, really. YOU ARE THE BEST!

ENCORE!,Good-Bye,A.R.- MistressELEMENT

Suicide is NOT the answer! Good song... in a punky, death is peaceful, emo kind of way...

Wow... I have a fangirl... :D Thanks for your reviews of Earthstones.

What can i say, i really like your songs.

Peace out, Kenzie

Most people hate it when I say this, but I'll say it anyway: Please capitalize the first letter in each line. It makes it seem much more professional, and not make it seem rushed. It's also a tad easier to read.

This is decently written, but not very original. If you read through the angst poems and such on this site you'll see just about all of the symbolism you put into your poem. The concept of "save me from myself," the hints of self-mutilation, the word "crimson" for blood, etc. I almost felt like I had read this before.

Also, in the last line, "gaveme" should be "gave me."

It may sound better with the tune and such you had in mind, though; I see some potential. Keep writing!!

I really really like this. Good structure. I always find it hard to critique songs without knowing the tune, but I can tell that this is a great song. I can't really think of any critical points to pick up on. I love 'crimson bracelets' - the imagery is fantastic. The chorus works really well, too, filled with pain and horror. I can see why it's your favourite. It's mine too! Vre good. :)