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| InspiredSpider 2007-11-02 ch 15, | abuseThat's the end? No! You can't leave it like that... It's a good cliffhanger though and it says enough. It's promising. I'm still holding out for Levi and Donyelle (fingerscrossed) ANYWAY, I can't believe it's been like TEN years since I last reviewed you (since I've even been on this site probably) and I don't even know if you're still checking your reviews for this but if you are: HEY. HOW'S IT GOING. ARE YOU STILL STALKING ALEXIS BLEDEL. lol. So anyway, I'll see you around. I'll check your profile to see what you're writing these days, big smile :-D ~spider~ |
| FalseReflections 2007-10-26 ch 15, | abusei really liked it. is this complete by the way? because the filters say it is... |
| candlekitty 2007-07-25 ch 15, anon. | abuseohman! i nearly panicked when i saw the title, thinking that it was the last chapter. T.T Thank goodness it's just a cliffhanger... |
| Guardrail 2007-07-24 ch 15, | abuseCliffhanger! Why? That makes me mad! You'd better update soon. (aka, good chapter!) |
| Confused Yellow Stallion 2007-07-24 ch 15, | abuseO_o Sorry... Now I feel like a pest. Nonetheless, another good chappie ! AWE ! ! ! ! ! I'm seeing strange crushie coming along ! ! ! Very cute, if I'm right. Confused **... I mean... Stallion... >.> |
| Midnight Strike 2007-07-24 ch 15, | abusewhat? is that all so far? is it complete? i want to know what happens! i like how he's nice, but not TOO nice. and how he's protective of his mother. it's a little scary the supposed similarity to his dad though. and donyelle is a fun character. same with heather. i don't like bianca though. |
| Midnight Strike 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha. I have to say this is quite clever. It's a fun parody of stereotypes but not in a mean way. And the 'Ditto' part was really cute. I'm going to keep on reading. |
| candlekitty 2007-07-01 ch 14, | abusei just reread this for the 3rd time and everytime, i laugh my ** off. UPDATE SOON! |
| Guardrail 2007-06-17 ch 14, | abuseHaha this was a great chapter! "I have genital herpes" LMAO I love that commercial. So what's gonna happen with Levi and Bianca? I love this story. Keep writing, I can't wait for the next bit! |
| InspiredSpider 2007-06-16 ch 14, | abusehey i'm on your well levi's side I liked gone in 60 seconds. the first five times my brothers made me watch it. i think i deserve some brownie points though i do prefer gangsta/crime/dramas movies the most (it's not a total lie okay)alright you got me just trying to fit in with the guys so hey dude. hows life. long time no speak- you know this chapter was good actually i like that Bianca had to ask levi out first that was funny and also when he notices heather checking out donyelle i can imagine that happening lol oh yeah and levi's got some male rivalry in the house ey? well kind of. he's not the alpha male anymore. actually i don't really think he ever was... lol georgie's more of an alpha male- okay i've got a mission for you, (if you choose to accept) make levi more manly lol alright i think i'm babbling a bit okay a lot (i'm a little bored. i'm supposed to be revising but blah whatever you know) okay gotta go until whenever ~spider~ |
| Confused Yellow Stallion 2007-06-15 ch 14, | abuseI was just about to cyber-yell at you for not adding chapters in... Pretty much forever. This chapter rocked, but I was kind of still hoping Levi was gay, sad faces, so double-u tee eff? Are you gonna make him gay or what? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! Lol, I really love the genital herpes commercial. Confused... |
| FreedomStar 2007-05-14 ch 13, | abuseI love this story! It's so entertaining, Levi's personality. He's so...casual about everything, but it's just honestly how he is. He seems like a fun person. I wish I had a friend like that. Not that the friends I already have aren't great; he just seems like a different kind of fun. He's not like the typical guy portrayed in the many stories here on fp. I think growing up in a household full of girls was part of the reason. He's quite amusing, really; his reaction to Martin was so funny! This story is going on my fav./alert list. :) Hope to get another update soon! |
| Guardrail 2007-04-26 ch 13, | abuseHahaha that last bit was funny. I love this story, keep writing and update soon! |
| Confused Yellow Stallion 2007-04-25 ch 13, | abuseAWE! I like it, 'tis awesome. ~Me. |
| InspiredSpider 2007-04-11 ch 12, | abuseaww short but sweet i really liked it actually, to see some friendly (cough cough) action between Dony and Levi... their names sound good together... anyway i love all the sweetsy stuff but when do people start getting blown up?? I'm joking. Of course. Just feeling bloodthirsty lol. A little weird okay no comment... so i'm sorry for reviewing late but better late than never or whatever. that rhymed. weather. lol. okay so I'm going to go because my head is spinning and i'm talking ** until whenever ~spider~ ps update soon |