Very unique piece of writing. Excellent idea, writing about an author. It's interesting to note the struggles people sometimes have with getting others to understand the stories they tell, or where the inspiration came from...I liked this a lot. =]

Powerful, original, and well-written. I really enjoyed reading this.

this beginining was interesting. david's emotions were clearly played out, and revealed. perhaps a plot: its an autobiography?! haha. i really liked how william at the ending, knelt down and prayed. but why? suddenly, for no rhyme or reason. if there was a 'he shook his head' or something i believe it'd be clearer. anyway. continue writing! this story has great potential.

review mine if you please? :)