hey 's a tad bit upset-sounding, but that's okay. it's still pretty darn good. :P and i like the rhythm.,

Like I said before...this is a great piece of work! You know that you have a gift for writing poetry...a whole hell of a lot better than I am...that is why I stopped writing poetry in high school...keep it up!

i'm not much of a poet critic. however i did enjoy your poem; if it was dedicated to me, i'd feel very really touched! however in the fourth stanza, i was wondering, does that mean that the persona dont want to shed her tears in front of her friends? i was just wondering. perhpas i got the interpretation wrong..anyway. continue writing!