Look, I'm sorry, but just like 'Obstruct, Destruct', the use of font-faces did absoloutely nothing to further this poem. In fact, from the first moment, it hindered it. I don't know what message you're trying to get across by it, but it would just read better as 'my, my, my, my', rather than what you've got.

However, I did like the message of this poem - like I do for most your poetry. I just feel that sometimes you use formatting/different font faces to try and further that message, and end up somewhat destroying it. So I'd suggest you just tried a more conventional sense of poetry, to construct it a little better. If you ever need a betareader, I'd be glad to assist!

- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon (link in my profile)

Zing!

How many instances does this bring to mind where friends.boyfriends.girlfriends are too involved in themselves to notice you bleeding on the side of the life, almost as unimportant as roadkill.

So short, but the message is like a slap in the face that needed no more words.

I love when poets can work a message that's so deep into about three or four lines.

Wonderful piece of work from you.