Well, this is concise and not sappy at all... I have spotted some mispelled words, but nontheless, I still like this story.

I enjoyed this story alot. It has much meaning to it. There a few grammar mistakes but that's minor. It's all really good :).

Lapotorus

I love this one, it's short, and sweet, very spiritual. :) It's poetic, surely the idea isn't fresh for we human beings have been thinking about life for as long as we could think, but it's very true, and the way you wrote it carries the meaning perfectly. Loved it. :)

~CA