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The baava Project
2008-03-22
ch 10,
abuseI've really enjoyed reading this, and I'm sad to see it ended (it's been a while since the last update). You have a talent for writing - or the knowledge for it - that's a pleasure to find online.

I want to cry for Norah and Daniel.

Ah, I can't be intelligent this early in the morning! *grin* I really, truly, had fun reading this.

Regards,
Ten-chan
The baava Project
2008-03-22
ch 7,
abuseThis was a really good chapter! Norah has a strong narrative voice, and I enjoy her (and all of her quirks) very much. She's strong, though it seems she has no idea.

Joey's idea of cleaning had me laughing! Too cute.

[He towered over me like a six foot flame ready to burn my ** for breaking the rules.] ~ My favorite line.

~ Ten-chan
The baava Project
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is an interesting intro, though I am a little thrown by not knowing if the narrator is male or female (are there hints that I'm not picking up?). But that's actually not much of a problem, as the narration itself is clear and well-written.

I am curious to see where this is going so I shall keep reading. Just wanted to let you know I'm here.

Regards,
Ten-chan
M.R.Sanner
2007-03-10
ch 10,
abuseOops sorry it took me so long to review this ! But it was well worht it because all I can say is - awesume ! I can't wait for the next chapter so please update soon ,ok? Ok.

COnfuzzld Me
Yonder
2007-02-25
ch 10,
abuseOh, I love this!
So he was a ghost huh? That explains a lot...

-Update soon please!
incandescente
2007-02-13
ch 10,
abuseoh man. the cliff hanger was as unexpected as it was. contradicting but.. this new twist of the story is indeed exciting! but.. if im not wrong, daniel and norah grew up together is it not? (or perhaps its just that i lost track of the plot somehow.) thus how can he be older than norah?
incandescente
2007-02-13
ch 9,
abuse"Let me tell you about the downside to a wonderful life: it eventually collapses." how true.

" knew there was someone in my room" how did the persona know? by intuition?

"It sounded like they were going through " I thought it was only an intruder. but it became "they"?

This chapter is a welcoming return for myself, sort of a homecoming to fictionpress. once again i'm very much intrigued and am still hoping for a good ending of the story. jiayou!
Mally Lunacy
2007-01-14
ch 10,
abuseThis is very very good! :) plz update soon
Opal Rose
2007-01-06
ch 10,
abuseOh my god, he's dead!!?!?!?!?!? Well, that was a twist.
I love this story. It's so good, and Norah is so cool. And, apparently, not as crazy as everyone thought.
Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!
Wolf bathed in Star-light
2006-12-19
ch 10,
abusei really like this. it's good. it's not the usual 'i see ghosts' type thing and its sweet. you've obviously researched into it a little. and im looking forward to reading more. :D:D:D:D Daniel seems sweet to me.
Hope.And.What.Not
2006-12-10
ch 10,
abusewow! that was such a good chapter, i have to cut this reveiw short but i still loved your chapter !
true calling
ClassyMinx
2006-12-08
ch 10,
abusei love it, i am honest...i was completely mesmerized by thiss tory...i love it...i swear! It's amazing! Is there more to come??
Chelsea Dagger
2006-12-07
ch 10,
abuseOH MY GOD! Not only did you update, but those chapters were (extremely SHORT) awesome! Daniel's real. Or, was real. I guess. So now I'm totally hooked. I HAVE to know what's going on here. Oh, and you'd better explain what the night her parents never talk about is. Because I went back and read through the whole story again to make sure I didn't miss anything (it's been a while since I've read this) and I don't think I missed any mention of it before. So basically, this story rocks. Update SOON! :)

~Tunny
elisefey
2006-09-28
ch 8,
abuseHa! I *knew* Joey liked her.
M.R.Sanner
2006-09-19
ch 8,
abusePlease update soon! I love this story it's so good ! When's Daniel coming back ! It would be kewl if Joey could see Daniel ^ ^. Then mayb she's not crazy ,or you could do the whole anne rice thing and ahve Daniel actually as her donor twin ( like in black gold farm ? is that the title ?)
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