ah, the human tendency for instant gratification...the ending's justified...

If you've written something poetic it should be this. If you mention yourself writing something poetic once I'll be reminded of this. So its sad and even depressing, it has even this bit of horror in it, but it IS, without a doubt, poetry.

The constant need of flying, of dying of the girl is disturbing, but then the boy appears and it gives a feeling of foreseeing but also hope for the girl to stay alive.

I loved the last part best, when she dies and he reveals that he too was being a little selfish at wanting her to live, otherwise she wouldn't get the wings she wanted so badly.

And she didn't get them! Wah!

Keep up the excellent work sis. You just get better and better =D

Best Wishes from the Big Sis