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kloun mannequin 2008-04-03 ch 6,	abuseit's cute, I like the flow of this, it seems the ideas come naturally, I like how the this starting, I like I can find some innocence in this, maybe like a first love. and I like zack
CaveDwellers 2008-03-09 ch 6,	abuseHey. I would have just been a lurker bfor this one, but I can't help but point out that the dude in this chapter changed his name from Evan to Ryan about halfway through. That and I don't know where the "she withdrew her arm" thing came from. Withdrew her arm from where? Her hand from his? I dunno. It's interesting how history repeats itself in your story. I guess Zack and Evie's relationship is pretty cool, but I can't say it's one of my favorites. They're really cute, though especially her ever-handy ability to flag down taxis. I probably wouldn't have much luck with that, either. 'Til next, CD 1.0
lovefantasyworkreality 2007-12-23 ch 6,	abuseAw, man! I was hoping for more on Evie and Zack! Oh, well, it's good enough as an ending as one could hope.
Kieyuku Namida 2007-12-23 ch 6,	abuseThat was a wonderful story. I loved how realistic your characters were, and the way you described their situations. I'm glad you decided to coninue writing their story instead of just leaving it as a oneshot. I'll guess that Miri is their daughter in the future? It was great how you repeated the scene in the end. Keep up the good work.
lovefantasyworkreality 2007-11-12 ch 4,	abuseI really, really like this story. Please, please, PLEASE keep writing!
lovefantasyworkreality 2007-10-01 ch 5,	abuseI'm liking this story. It has me very intrigued. Please keep writing on it. Unless you're totally forcing yourself to, because I've found that if I'm forcing myself to write either I get little done or what I do write sucks. So don't force yourself.
liquid-dreams-139 2007-05-11 ch 5,	abuseaww i missed these two characters! so sweet!! he proposed! their gonna have SOME story to tell their kids when they ask how they even met, huh? lol it was funny how u alternated their dialogues with the tornado warnings. glad u decided to continue this troy instead of just making it a one-shot.
loversloveliarslie x. 2007-04-28 ch 5,	abuseThat was so good :]. yay Evie and Zac got together :D please keep updating.
liquid-dreams-139 2007-03-18 ch 3,	abusehey! hahaha been a long time right? damn i suck dont i? totally stopped writing! dunno, the computer was giving me a hard time and i ha my exams and just LIFE in general so... im supposed to be studying for my chemistry final exam tomorrow but i decided to visit you guys again... haha moving on to ur story... i dont know how you do it! its like everytime i read ur work, it fills images in my mind and i cAN so imagine every detail of ur story! and i liked the whle flashback thing. are they ever gonna get together? i dunno, maybe they shouldnt... i like them like this, constantly meeting in strange places, always under the rain. i wish i has a guy like that! finding me during totally times, entering my life for a short time and then just dissapearing until next time. like an angel, almost... hahaha kiez i better get going b4 my mom finds out what im doing! cya around... and hopefully i get round to updating in my upcoming summer vacays...
fairytale failure 2006-11-03 ch 1,	abuseWow, I love the part where she is predicting what will happen to her later that day. It surprised me so much, at first I thought maybe she was psychic or something! My one critique is that it seems a bit odd that they become so friendly after just meeting, but I guess people say that sometimes when people meet they feel like they've already known each other for a long time. Other wise, it was incredible.
Jewel of the Sea 2006-10-30 ch 2,	abuseThat was such a sweet story. Your characters were wonderfully created. Good job!
liquid-dreams-139 2006-08-15 ch 1,	abusei love your one-shots!! damn so sweet! btw, does this have anything to do with ur name?? u know, rain-angel?? rain? lol im putting this on my favs anyway!! oh, yeah, the sequels out!!
YuLian 2006-07-23 ch 1,	abuseOh amazing story! I really think that's so sweet. And thank you for agreeing that James and Kree MUST get together. They'd make an awesome pair! -YuLian
Victoria Humblydum 2006-07-22 ch 1,	abusei really liked the randomnessity (is that a word?) of this poem. it was, i don't know, different.
catharsis7 2006-07-22 ch 1,	abuseThat was very good. I like Evangeline, though she's a bit random. I think she is good for Zack.

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