it's cute, I like the flow of this, it seems the ideas come naturally, I like how the this starting, I like I can find some innocence in this, maybe like a first love.
and I like zack

Hey. I would have just been a lurker bfor this one, but I can't help but point out that the dude in this chapter changed his name from Evan to Ryan about halfway through.

That and I don't know where the "she withdrew her arm" thing came from. Withdrew her arm from where? Her hand from his? I dunno.

It's interesting how history repeats itself in your story.

I guess Zack and Evie's relationship is pretty cool, but I can't say it's one of my favorites. They're really cute, though especially her ever-handy ability to flag down taxis. I probably wouldn't have much luck with that, either.

'Til next,
CD 1.0

Aw, man! I was hoping for more on Evie and Zack! Oh, well, it's good enough as an ending as one could hope.

That was a wonderful story. I loved how realistic your characters were, and the way you described their situations. I'm glad you decided to coninue writing their story instead of just leaving it as a oneshot. I'll guess that Miri is their daughter in the future? It was great how you repeated the scene in the end. Keep up the good work.

I really, really like this story. Please, please, PLEASE keep writing!

I'm liking this story. It has me very intrigued. Please keep writing on it. Unless you're totally forcing yourself to, because I've found that if I'm forcing myself to write either I get little done or what I do write sucks. So don't force yourself.

aww i missed these two characters! so sweet!! he proposed! their gonna have SOME story to tell their kids when they ask how they even met, huh? lol it was funny how u alternated their dialogues with the tornado warnings. glad u decided to continue this troy instead of just making it a one-shot.

That was so good :]. yay Evie and Zac got together :D please keep updating.

hey! hahaha been a long time right? damn i suck dont i? totally stopped writing! dunno, the computer was giving me a hard time and i ha my exams and just LIFE in general so... im supposed to be studying for my chemistry final exam tomorrow but i decided to visit you guys again... haha moving on to ur story...
i dont know how you do it! its like everytime i read ur work, it fills images in my mind and i cAN so imagine every detail of ur story! and i liked the whle flashback thing. are they ever gonna get together?
i dunno, maybe they shouldnt... i like them like this, constantly meeting in strange places, always under the rain. i wish i has a guy like that! finding me during totally times, entering my life for a short time and then just dissapearing until next time. like an angel, almost...
hahaha kiez i better get going b4 my mom finds out what im doing! cya around... and hopefully i get round to updating in my upcoming summer vacays...

Wow, I love the part where she is predicting what will happen to her later that day. It surprised me so much, at first I thought maybe she was psychic or something! My one critique is that it seems a bit odd that they become so friendly after just meeting, but I guess people say that sometimes when people meet they feel like they've already known each other for a long time. Other wise, it was incredible.

That was such a sweet story. Your characters were wonderfully created. Good job!

i love your one-shots!! damn so sweet! btw, does this have anything to do with ur name?? u know, rain-angel?? rain? lol im putting this on my favs anyway!! oh, yeah, the sequels out!!

Oh amazing story! I really think that's so sweet. And thank you for agreeing that James and Kree MUST get together. They'd make an awesome pair!

-YuLian

i really liked the randomnessity (is that a word?) of this poem. it was, i don't know, different.

That was very good. I like Evangeline, though she's a bit random. I think she is good for Zack.