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| plural 2006-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseI like this. I has nice flow and it's very thoughtful. It looks like you put a lot of work into it. I especially like the first three lines, for they really made me think. The last line, too, makes me wonder. In the third line, when you used "it's", did you mean the possessive "its"? I'm just wondering if that was a mistake or if I'm reading it wrong. Anyway, very nice poem. I liked it. :) |