I love this piece. Thanks for sharing :)

This is so lovely! And written well. I enjoyed reading it, and felt the motion- yahdi yahdi yah! I don't even know how to explain xD I liked it, mhm.

This is amazing. The emotions are real and everything about it screams emotion to me. I've been through this. I let go the one girl I've ever loved just for the cold acceptance of society. All the emotions this character felt, I've felt when I left her. Good job on the realism. Really great story.

Jesus!

Make me cry why don't you!

:3

I liked it very much.

Kris

God, it's sad. And makes me fear; sounds like the kind of thing you swear over and over again that you will never do... but that in truth, you can never be sure enough.

Anyways I liked it a lot!

Take care & be happy.

deppressing, but i like it.

This was beautiful and so, so sad.

Every emotion, every description was pure and readily felt. You did an immensely fantastic job with this piece. (:

Oh, how sad. This was recommended to me, and I'm glad I read it. It's really, really good. At first it was difficult to get used to the point of view and tenses, but it does make it feel more personal, like everything that happened happened to me, personally. Very very well done!

dramatically sad..Lol, x_X I hope i don't end up doing that some day, and i hope I wouldn't end up getting that...

Wow. So beautiful. Perfect. Wow.

beautiful

Beautifully bitter and subtly hopeful; it is magnificent.

Wow. That was so, so beautiful. The imagery you used was just stunning. Very realistic, and touching. I loved it.

That was beautiful, and so sad. You captured the emotions perfectly, and the narration was dead on. I could almost feel what she was going through, such a powerful feeling, and I'm extremely impressed at how well you defined everything. Not many people can to that.

This was recommended to me by another author, and I'm glad I took up her suggestion. This is definitely going on my favorites.

This story was powerful...it resonated so much with me, and it hurt, because I my girlfriend and I just agreed to break up. I played the part of the redhead (which was also strange, because I am a redhead) and I was the one who decided I couldn't live with myself if I didn't give a het relationship a try. I'm Catholic, too...

So, yeah. The story hurt, because I hurt right now, but it was good. It was real, and I liked it. Thanks.