Reviews for Angel's Halo 1: Devil's Rising

Reviews For: Angel's Halo 1: Devil's Rising - Reviews: Page 1 of 18

truthordeal 2007-03-18 ch 11,	abuseVery original. There are no grammatical mistakes as far as I can see, so your story is perfect so congratulations, you lucky bastard. lol.
anti-climax 2007-02-25 ch 11,	abusenice and unconventional, though refreshing ending. For once, the hero doesn't win... Good stuff.
Atamagaokashii Ookami-chan 2007-02-15 ch 11,	abuseoh my gowsh... it's getting really good i absolutely adore the fight scenes!_! th eplots coming along nicely and u have great grammar thank u!_! hope u continue soon
anti-climax 2007-02-14 ch 5,	abusevery nice story thus far. :) I can't really think, or am in the mood for CC-ing so I'll just leave it at that, though I'll finish up the rest some other time.
ByFyreLyte 2007-02-05 ch 6,	abuseNot much to review anew, though glad to see that the chaps are back up. Looking forward to pt. II.
Morte d'Amour 2007-01-29 ch 2,	abuseHey, just wanted to say that I read your profile and the same note in these two chapters about what you've decided to do with this story, and that I'll be back once this picks up a steady pace (whenever that is) and I'm looking forward to continuing to read more and finally find out what happened. Nice decision! Oh, and Happy Belated Birthday.
Shiranui Akatsuki 2007-01-24 ch 2,	abuseOh, yay! You finally updated!
Outlaw-2, The Forgotten Wri... 2007-01-19 ch 2, anon.	abuseHey there, Outlaw-2 here, Well, looks like you finally got back into stride after a rather... sluggish stint for a few months. I was wondering what had happened to the story when the chapters were removed when I had the intention to review back then. So, you won't have to worry about losing a loyal reader here. I'll definately drop by when another chapter comes in. Anyway, it's been quite a while since you reviewed Tokyo Battalions as well, even though you reviewed The Military System. I assume you were waiting for Akito's return? Not to worry, Akito will return once I'm done with the first part of Tokyo Battalions; he will return as an official debut in Part 2, Illusion. Sincerely, Outlaw-2, The Forgotten Writer
ByFyreLyte 2007-01-18 ch 2,	abuseAh crap my head hurts...well at least take out the first A/N (Yeah i started writing again!), b/c that'll throw everybody off...Again, not much new to review. RoT looks to be pretty cool though.
Dice 2007-01-18 ch 2, anon.	abuseI'll probably jump back into this around chapter 12. Happy birthday and all that good stuff.
Shiranui Akatsuki 2007-01-18 ch 1,	abuseYou removed all the chapters?! NO WAY! What happened after Dante got his hand torn off?
Lady Lilliana 2007-01-07 ch 1,	abuseThis is really good. I'll keep an eye on you.
Atheneon 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseVery interesting. I don't have very much experience with vampfics...but this story is off to a good start. You've given some powers to your character that I've never heard of. Keep going, this story sounds cool.
fangs of faith 2006-12-14 ch 1,	abuseI like it, it has a certain twist to it.
felicia13 2006-12-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseYJan ... why? I liked AH the way it was ... and nothing much seems to have changed in this first chapter. Added to the fact that you still have all the reviews from the first rewrite ... means I have to do this anonymously. Rawr. Since nothing much has changed, I'm finding this rewrite to be tedious. Seriously. If you aren't going to make big plot changes (like you did between AH the original and AH: Devil's Rising), then I don't really want to be reading it all over again. At the very least, you have deleted the old story so that everyone who had reviewed the first time could do so with a signed review. As for the story ... it looks exactly the same as it did before. I believe you know my thoughts on it already, so ... I won't reiterate my point. You're getting sloppy in your old age, YJan. Felicia.

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