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katieee
2008-05-13
ch 22,
abuse:[ I like Seth and I like Rick. And Dante causes to much problems. And Im really sad because I don't understand what she went to go do.
ANd I really really really love this. It's written so great. :]
I hate when friends drift apart.
If I drifted away from my friends now, I'd hvae no one.
I really like Kari. I think that's her name.
Anyways, I really like her, she's nice.
:] And I realy reeweally love this; once again.
Please update soon!
katieee
2008-05-13
ch 18,
abuseMAN. Im sorry. I usually review every chapter of stories, but this one is so good I couldn't stop. My fingers aren't hitting the right keys and all. So, this won't be long. When i get to the alst chapter it'll be better. And I thank God that there is a achapter after this.
DAMN.
Everything's wrong. I really like Seth though. Why did I freak out when Seth said he's crazy about her? I really wanted Cassidy and Seth I mean Rick to talk and dance at the dance.
I freaked though when Amy said she loved Dante.
Things are going to get MESSY.
AHAHHA. When Cassidy hit Amy in the hall for a second, I thought Amy loved Niccolette or whatever her name is. :] Wow, was I ever wrong.
tamsin89
2008-05-08
ch 22,
abusehey i jus wanted to say i luv Brown Eyes, been reading and staying with it for ages. but question, but why did u cut how cassidy handles amy's betrayal? i mean i can under stand y u cut the last chapter but y cassidy's reaction?
Temple Trees
2008-04-29
ch 22,
abuseGreat story. Update soon!
faithful.dream
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseaw ! lol
nm1210
2008-04-14
ch 22,
abuseomg i freakin love Cassidy...**,** i love this story...best i have read ...omg im waiting to se what happens next...
Amby
2008-04-06
ch 1, anon.
abusehello, i am not a reader of this story but i am really intrested in reading it because i have heard from many that it is the best of its kind, so can you please tell me when you are going to finish revising it, so that i can read it? i will really appreciate it if you do so.
=D
Chelsea
2008-04-03
ch 22, anon.
abuseHey, the story is great so far I really like the plot for it all, and your doing a great job! so when is the next chapter coming?
zm mz
2008-03-27
ch 11,
abusea twit also means a pregnent goldfish.
copykat
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abuseGood luck on the revision! I can't wait to read it when it's done
Kamekazix3
2008-03-19
ch 22,
abuseAHH! update, please! must.. know! >< & btw, it's quite good & interesting (: tad cliche, & if only purple eyes were real ):
Random Word Artist
2008-03-17
ch 22, anon.
abuseIn case you're wondering, I'm too lazy to sign in.

And...

I am SO confused.

Sigh...I guess I should have listened to that warning...but I never listen to warnings...
pinkfairydust
2008-03-14
ch 22,
abuseplease please update soon!
and also.. i know it's not really her personality and all but shouldn't she be a little more upset.. coz my friend is a lot like Cassidy and she doesn't really cry, but she sort of bottles everything up and then has times when she just completely breaks. And so i was thinking shouldn't Cassidy be due for her breakdown? It's like she's been bottling a lot of stuff up [mainly anger but still..] and so yeah..
haha sorry if that didn't make much sense =P
chezzzzzzz
2008-03-14
ch 22,
abusewow... really really really awesome story...

question: is Dante and Cassidy blood related?
Chelsea
2008-03-14
ch 22, anon.
abuseThis is a great story and a truly dramatic plot I love it! I can't wait til the next chapter!
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