Reviews for Tom vs Dahlia - FictionPress.com

Carmel March 2007-06-12 ch 1,	Huh. I really liked this piece. It was very realistic, quite believable. Good job on this! ~carm~
goldennight 2006-08-25 ch 1,	he seems like a bastard. . .i think he should eat his cheesecake and choke . . .or something similar. love your writing. loove! Kelsi
lovelikefire 2006-08-07 ch 1,	Well that was...a story I've already heard, yet good nonetheless. The dialogue was perfectly done. And very cute/sad poem at the end.
NowOrNever 2006-07-23 ch 1,	Aww, poor Dahlia! I thought it was very good. Guys can be such idiots sometimes. Seriously. : )
multiples of six 2006-07-23 ch 1,	Poor Dahlia. Reminds me of me.. people are always saying I should talk more. =( Tom seems pretty dumb. Aside from all the stupid things he says to a nice girl like Dahlia, couldn't he have eaten cheesecake and THEN gone for a walk? But yeah. Hehe. I liked the story, you can tell from how much I'm babbling. =)