that was... amazing. it felt like i was the one in so much turmoil. i cried, i really did--both times that i read it. you are such a great writer.

may you always hold onto hope and friendship; they are beacons of light whenever you find yourself enveloped in the darkness.

Intense first chapter. I liked it though and Darci is a great name, it fits her character well too. Claudia is an evil name as well, or at least I think so.