Every girls dream isnt it. A poem that depicts wat romace an desire hopefully lead up 2. I liked it!

The sweetest dream two people could have, to want to spend the rest of their lives together. I really hope that this works out for you, you deserve this. Great job.

That was great. I don't really like romantic things, but this was an acception. P.s. Tanx for reviewing my poem_

Hey, I'm back.

I really like this poem. It's so sincere and heartfelt. Glad to have read this.

i haven't been on in awhile...hope you remember me. this poem is quite beautiful. really does a good heart-string-pulling.

Long, descriptive and sweet. I'm short of words. Nicely done. I look forward to your next update. - ADD-san

Great flow to this. I don't think it's as "little house on the prarie" as a first reading would have it seem though - "dirty little secret" and seeing her through the window? Hm...dunno, but that may just be me reading too much into it.

Aww! This is so sweet.

Very sweet. Beautifully written, I could imagin it all in my mind.

Keep it up.

wow suprise ending twist, i like it! very cute and romantic P

Aw! That was cute. The last line really tied it all together well.