i liked the last 4 lines. overall, it reminds me of a song i once heard. lol. loved the flow :)

~mez~

Nothing to say except "amazing". I love the circular feel- you began with the mouth and ended with the throat, and there's heady, plum imagery...ooh, have to use that (sorry, I'm experiencing the too-cliched 'writer's block', and refraining from writing about it, instead opting to jumble words until they provide me with something malleable). My favorite phrase isn't actually a phrase, it's the word "imperative"- it fits so well, and is so underused in this context. `~bella~`

Sounds like you're a bit timid there. One of the most vivid love poems ever. Just the way I feel. And by the way, I to wrote a love poem entitled Untitled: Pt. 2 a couple of weeks back, which is kind of ironic in a way.