ah, this is so cute. bittersweet and heart-touching. short but the emotions are deep. awesome work :)

~mez~

somewhere this poem touches me. it's short but it really captures childhood. lovely.

Well, I am so behind at this point, I don't know if I'll ever catch up. But I don't need to read all of your poems to know they're fantastic, each and every one. This one doesn't fail to please, or to show the talent I've come to adore.

As you know, I like LONG stuff, but I realize that we all have different-minded Muses, so I won't nit-pick on that point. It's a really nice, relaxing poem to read, kind of a quiet joy reflected as one experiences when recalling fond memories. Nicely done, of course!

~Ceddy Teddy