Holy fuck thats awsome. This is just... wow I can't think of nothing but that and I am just so impressed by your poem. Good job and please don't stop writing.

Wolf.

Horrible. I mean that in a good way. Its a horrible story told in excellent hit and miss fashion; in a way where you drift in and out of reality. Good work.

Isaac Hoffman

i really enjoyed your poem, it was original and presented good imagery.