this is really cool and thought of well, i hope you will update after so long, keep it up.

please update! oh and it just accured 2 me that u never told us wat ur chars looked like and i would like 2 no...

Ahh! You cant go on haitus now! They're just getting to China! Yup, I am definitely bugging you later to update! hehehe. If you didnt notice, i like the story. How do u ever get the right pace for stories like this? Talent, I must say!

Um...yay for Nicole? lol.

aw...they like each other! hehehe. i cant wait to read more...that is if u decide to keep writing...maybe i can pester u to do it...hehehe

Okay I was wrong about the accomplice...so sue me...anyways...i kinda like this chapter...just because of the torture scenes! hehe...Alex is back! yay!

Agh! Noe! No! O the last scene was suspenseful! I think I know who the person is, but I'm not going to say anything until I'm sure. O..is Nicole being sent to North or South Korea...you better not kill her off! I will be very upset if the comedy relief left! lol.

Good job!

... attempt a rescue mission or an execution mission.”

Natalie then realized he had chosen the latter.

You mean former. :-)

Nice chapter - this story's a lot more substantial than the previous one.

Hey there!This story is awesome!I just got around reading COP and now the sequel and this is absolutely amazing!I love this story.I know you said you are going on a hiatus but please update as soon as you ..Hope you do cause I can't wait to read the next ,thats !

Hey I don't mind waiting, this story is excellent. Hope to read an update one day!

Nice chapter. Its been awhile since I read your stories! Really like Nicole...sarcastic personality! I couldnt help the feeling that it was somewhat lost associated...just me being wieird I guess. I'll read more when I can, but its pretty much awesome, good steady pace, and easy to read!

As you said, these chapters have been a bit slow, but I appreciate that you are building up. I just can't wait to find out what happens in Asia. I like the way you've developed the characters as well, who knows what could happen. Excellent stuff and I'm already itching for the next update.

enjoying it so far! cant wait to read more!

I really like your work please keep writing. You have the ability to become great.

HE HE...of course anywone who reads this will love this! Well...at least I do! They seem so happy together...Natalie and Alex, its so nice that Natalie at last seems to get along with someone!

I cannot believe that they are off on a mission they are like paint that hasn't had time to dry! They have hardly been on any missions! Well natalie hasn't...Alex I don't really know about!

Alex's childhood seemed rather rough...poor guy! He is going to end up just like his father!

Anyways...

PLEASE update soon!

Alexa xox

Hey Hey! Ok for some strange reason my updates aren't working so it took me a few days to realize that people were still updating in the holiday season.. Who'da thunk it? Anyways! Happy Turkey Day! I know it's tomorrow but whatever. I am loving this story as you probably know. I don't always review because sometimes I just have enough time to get online read the new chapter and get off before my mom starts yelling at me for wasting time. Yea, annoying. I know! I will try to review more often though. Hopefully every chapter, but I'm making no promises. Because I'd hate to get your hopes up and then just like dash 'em. I know that I'm being very blunt right now but I'm on a TINY sugar high, and when I'm on a sugar high, I tend to talk alot and rammble and be very rude and blunt. So sorry if I say something slightly offensive. I don't mean it. So what are you doing for Turkey Day? I hate turkey, but I love sweet potato pie, with marshmellows. Gotta have marshmellows. Oh right back on subject. I love the chapter, it's deffinetly going places. I can't wait until the next one. So is something gonna happen between Alex and Nat? Hmm? Ok well I should go before I completely make an ass out of myself. Although it's bound to happen sometime. I'd rather it be in the quiet and aloneness of my own home where I don't have to hear anyone's laughter but my own. So Ta Ta for now darling *insert jewish accent for that line* Ok see there I go making an ass out of myself.. I'm leaving now before I do even bigger damage to my ego.

Bye

Shayna