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Phantom452 2007-08-14 ch 11,	abuseAhh! You cant go on haitus now! They're just getting to China! Yup, I am definitely bugging you later to update! hehehe. If you didnt notice, i like the story. How do u ever get the right pace for stories like this? Talent, I must say! Um...yay for Nicole? lol.
Phantom452 2007-08-14 ch 8,	abuseaw...they like each other! hehehe. i cant wait to read more...that is if u decide to keep writing...maybe i can pester u to do it...hehehe
Phantom452 2007-08-14 ch 5,	abuseOkay I was wrong about the accomplice...so sue me...anyways...i kinda like this chapter...just because of the torture scenes! hehe...Alex is back!! yay!
Phantom452 2007-08-14 ch 4,	abuseAgh! Noe! No! O the last scene was suspenseful! I think I know who the person is, but I'm not going to say anything until I'm sure. O..is Nicole being sent to North or South Korea...you better not kill her off! I will be very upset if the comedy relief left! lol. Good job!
KimHua 2007-05-15 ch 6,	abuse... attempt a rescue mission or an execution mission.” Natalie then realized he had chosen the latter. You mean former. :-) Nice chapter - this story's a lot more substantial than the previous one.
SparklingStar25 2007-03-29 ch 11,	abuseHey there!This story is awesome!I just got around reading COP and now the sequel and this is absolutely amazing!I love this story.I know you said you are going on a hiatus but please update as soon as you can.Please..Hope you do cause I can't wait to read the next chapter.Well,thats all.Bye!
Dachande663-ff 2007-03-17 ch 11,	abuseHey I don't mind waiting, this story is excellent. Hope to read an update one day!
Phantom452 2007-03-08 ch 3,	abuseNice chapter. Its been awhile since I read your stories! Really like Nicole...sarcastic personality! I couldnt help the feeling that it was somewhat lost associated...just me being wieird I guess. I'll read more when I can, but its pretty much awesome, good steady pace, and easy to read!
Dachande663-ff 2006-12-31 ch 9,	abuseAs you said, these chapters have been a bit slow, but I appreciate that you are building up. I just can't wait to find out what happens in Asia. I like the way you've developed the characters as well, who knows what could happen. Excellent stuff and I'm already itching for the next update.
angelofdeceit 2006-12-29 ch 8,	abuseenjoying it so far! cant wait to read more!
Zeela Ravena 2006-12-04 ch 8,	abuseI really like your work please keep writing. You have the ability to become great.
alexa-xox 2006-11-24 ch 8,	abuseHE HE...of course anywone who reads this will love this! Well...at least I do! They seem so happy together...Natalie and Alex, its so nice that Natalie at last seems to get along with someone! I cannot believe that they are off on a mission they are like paint that hasn't had time to dry! They have hardly been on any missions! Well natalie hasn't...Alex I don't really know about! Alex's childhood seemed rather rough...poor guy! He is going to end up just like his father! Anyways... PLEASE update soon! Alexa xox
SkEpTiCaL.OnE.511 2006-11-22 ch 8,	abuseHey Hey! Ok for some strange reason my updates aren't working so it took me a few days to realize that people were still updating in the holiday season.. Who'da thunk it? Anyways! Happy Turkey Day! I know it's tomorrow but whatever. I am loving this story as you probably know. I don't always review because sometimes I just have enough time to get online read the new chapter and get off before my mom starts yelling at me for wasting time. Yea, annoying. I know! I will try to review more often though. Hopefully every chapter, but I'm making no promises. Because I'd hate to get your hopes up and then just like dash 'em. I know that I'm being very blunt right now but I'm on a TINY sugar high, and when I'm on a sugar high, I tend to talk alot and rammble and be very rude and blunt. So sorry if I say something slightly offensive. I don't mean it. So what are you doing for Turkey Day? I hate turkey, but I love sweet potato pie, with marshmellows. Gotta have marshmellows. Oh right back on subject. I love the chapter, it's deffinetly going places. I can't wait until the next one. So is something gonna happen between Alex and Nat?? Hmm?!?!?!?! Ok well I should go before I completely make an ** out of myself. Although it's bound to happen sometime. I'd rather it be in the quiet and aloneness of my own home where I don't have to hear anyone's laughter but my own. So Ta Ta for now darling insert jewish accent for that line Ok see there I go making an ** out of myself.. I'm leaving now before I do even bigger damage to my ego. Bye Shayna
Zeela Ravena 2006-11-16 ch 7,	abuseYour storys are some of the best I have read hear keep up the good work.
karate 2006-11-03 ch 7, anon.	abusenicole natalie alex and aaron is kind of confusing. I know you probably like the names and are used to them already, but i think it would probably better if you changed some names.

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