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Torchwood007
2008-05-20
ch 15,
This is absolutely fantastic! Get the next chapter up quick as you can; you've got me hooked.
Donna
2008-03-25
ch 14,
Ahh another lovely chapter from Patty
Paul
2008-03-25
ch 14,
O Chapter 14 was intense!
But u killed Gabriel and the hippy -.-
KILL LONDON! bring Gabriel back :P
Paul
2008-03-11
ch 1,
Very very nice!
Made my CIT lessons so much more interesting to read this :D
Now finish it :P
good job!
Donna
2008-02-22
ch 13,
Love this =)
Come on with the next chapter Patty!
xx
Aqua Revolver
2007-12-16
ch 11,
I knew it!
I told you it was him...
But u kept trying to throw me off...
EVIL!
ainslie
2007-12-10
ch 11,
i told u it was him
Aqua Revolver
2007-11-02
ch 10,
You suck! U killed off Ethan :(

I love Ethan!
me
2007-10-29
ch 9,
ah its the video!
>.<
i want to see it!!... actually.. read it..

gosh i am dedicated arent i .. just got back from holiday and what do i find myself doing?

or maybe thats down to my lack of social life.. haha

but no i say its because ur writing is brilliant
Aqua Revolver
2007-10-29
ch 9,
I think there should be more blaming, you should describe the reactions to each blame hahaha! more arguing too... put up chapter 10... AH!
not.a.spoiled.brat
2007-10-26
ch 9,
aw come on! what is the video? well hope you upate soon!
Solarska
2007-10-25
ch 1,
Hey evelyn here, loving it so far. Only constructive critism i can make is to shorten up the sentences, u tend to float on a bit. elsewise i like ur description and ur characters. definitly an interesting story!
Aqua Revolver
2007-10-14
ch 7,
I hope you noe that the last part got me totally freaked out... erg!
Poinky
2007-10-14
ch 7,
OH DUDE

*gag*

... Amazing Imagery ... but I really dont want to imagine that end part again O_O
ainslie
2007-10-01
ch 6,
naaw so cute with ethan ^_^

a bit like a dream i had actually but not quite.. lol
actually not at all.. but the same general idea..

me = like much!
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