Very good story. It was well written, had a good pace, and was interesting. I am glad to have read your story! The only thing is that you have a few minor mix-ups in characters and similar words.

Wow. I don't ussually review stories on this site, but for yours I had to. It was extremely well-written and paced. You had good charecter development and all that. You did a tremendous job with it. Well done.

This is an interesting idea, and a pretty good story. It drags a little in places, and there are one or two places where you get the characters mixed up, but for the most part it's cool.

I enjoyed it a lot, and am going to find something else of yours to read now!

Spawny

I really like this so far...I think Wesley was a tad harsh to the homeless man, but having a disability myself, I understand how frustrating it is when I come across someone who feels entitled to the world just because they are disabled. Give me a couple of days to finish what you've posted so far. :)