i'm sure you don't need me to tell you that this piece was amazing, but you must suffer through it anyway

i adore how you can fit so much emotion into two stanzas, && how this made me feel as if i was just robbed of all my internal conflict && you wrote it down for me into perfect words

"(it took me so long to choke out your name / and admit that it's you who made me this way)." && THAT is the truth..

People like you annoy me :). I like to review pieces with the least amount of reviews, preferably zero. All of you're had atleast one, usually more. Most of mine have one, sometimes less .

I like your writing style, it captures the readers attention. Or, it captures my attention atleast. I've been told I'm easily ammused. "and these scars won't heal any quicker" was my favorite line.

Thank you for your review.

Katrina

Yep, that's about all that can be said about addiction. Nice poem. Keep writing! :)

i love the theme you've got going, i know life isn't easy, i can tell from this poetry (infatuation, addiction), but you're writing it down so well & i loveit. it's wonderful. '(it took me so long to choke out your name & admit that it's you who made me this way).' brilliant, man...i lovethis poem. :) i wish for you that things get clearer.

I can relate to this so well. I emotions that I get from this are so much my own as well.

Keep it up.

i loved the last 2 verse of the 1st stanza. this is nicely written but i think you could have done a better ending...i still like it though _

Very nice poem. I can relate to it. But the last line is kinda off though.