It does remind me of Emily Dickinson. Sweet and to the point. Nice.

While this is a beautiful piece, i just wish that you put more thought or effort behind it and maybe lengthened it.

It's unbelievably elegant in its simplicity, however.

I can feel the influence of Emily Dickinson in this piece, but you also have your own unique voice. I liked this, but I wish it had been a bit longer and that the thoughts expressed here and been more developed, more complicated. Keep up the good work!