Hmm... really interesting. The more I think about this poem, the more I like it. I love the irony of the last two lines.

people do strange things for the ones they care about..this poem sums it up perfectly..

Cool. I like this.

Grave thoughts indeed, and well bent into words that haunt.

I hope they don't die. They'll stop making good poems if they do.

I liked the vindictive tone you used. I could practically feel the venom in the last line.

grave of thoughts - i wish my thoughts would just go the grave already. i guess some things never die. nice work with this poem.

very deep and... um i dont know how to describe its just wonderful work! Keep it up!

Powerful poem, very well written. Good job! Vx

I really enjoyed reading this. The ending was excellent. I love the candor of it. It made the line pack a powerful punch. Keep up the good work.