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Reviews For: Grave of My Thoughts
Tikklz 2007-03-13 . chapter 1
Hmm... really interesting. The more I think about this poem, the more I like it. I love the irony of the last two lines.
dancingintherain 2006-08-09 . chapter 1
people do strange things for the ones they care about..this poem sums it up perfectly..
hateandkill-D 2006-08-02 . chapter 1
Cool. I like this.
hanfiddle 2006-08-01 . chapter 1
Grave thoughts indeed, and well bent into words that haunt.
I.O.K.O 2006-07-26 . chapter 1
I hope they don't die. They'll stop making good poems if they do.
trash can art 2006-07-25 . chapter 1
I liked the vindictive tone you used. I could practically feel the venom in the last line.
breezy nostrils 2006-07-24 . chapter 1
grave of thoughts - i wish my thoughts would just go the grave already. i guess some things never die. nice work with this poem.
peppermintswirl962 2006-07-24 . chapter 1
very deep and... um i dont know how to describe its just wonderful work! Keep it up!
SayIt'sWrong 2006-07-23 . chapter 1
Powerful poem, very well written. Good job! Vx
sylvia's syndrome 2006-07-22 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading this. The ending was excellent. I love the candor of it. It made the line pack a powerful punch. Keep up the good work.
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