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| Travis C. Eckert 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abuseGood, only thing I noticed in some places "there" should be "their" other than that its just kind of a make you feel down poem. |
| fairytale failure 2006-09-16 ch 1, | abuseThis one comes across as a little difficult to read. |
| lordelfy 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abusePretty neat, random but cool. |
| abs1247 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abusei actually REALLY, REALLY liked this. and i'd like to say thank you for the review.. and to answer your question.. i LOVE AFI. great job, once again. xoxo abbylynn |
| burning in effigy 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseinteresting format... seems sort of like a rant and almost like there are many voices conflicting with each other. very nice :) |
| Porphyro's Madeline 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abusewow, that is really cool. I love how you underlined some words and used others in bold, it had a great effect! |
| awannabewriter 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, I am blown away by this. WTG. GREAT Job!! |
| Cae -n- Kae 2006-07-22 ch 1, | abusei love it. good job ^.^ love, me. |