Good, only thing I noticed in some places "there" should be "their" other than that its just kind of a make you feel down poem.

This one comes across as a little difficult to read.

Pretty neat, random but cool.

i actually REALLY, REALLY liked this. and i'd like to say thank you for the review.. and to answer your question.. i LOVE AFI. great job, once again. xoxo abbylynn

interesting format... seems sort of like a rant and almost like there are many voices conflicting with each other.

very nice :)

wow, that is really cool. I love how you underlined some words and used others in bold, it had a great effect!

Wow, I am blown away by this. WTG. GREAT Job!!

i love it. good job

^.^ love, me.