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Reviews For: Needing Something

Travis C. Eckert
2006-10-02
ch 1,
abuseGood, only thing I noticed in some places "there" should be "their" other than that its just kind of a make you feel down poem.
fairytale failure
2006-09-16
ch 1,
abuseThis one comes across as a little difficult to read.
lordelfy
2006-08-12
ch 1,
abusePretty neat, random but cool.
abs1247
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abusei actually REALLY, REALLY liked this. and i'd like to say thank you for the review.. and to answer your question.. i LOVE AFI. great job, once again. xoxo abbylynn
burning in effigy
2006-07-24
ch 1,
abuseinteresting format... seems sort of like a rant and almost like there are many voices conflicting with each other.

very nice :)
Porphyro's Madeline
2006-07-23
ch 1,
abusewow, that is really cool. I love how you underlined some words and used others in bold, it had a great effect!
awannabewriter
2006-07-23
ch 1,
abuseWow, I am blown away by this. WTG. GREAT Job!!
Cae -n- Kae
2006-07-22
ch 1,
abusei love it. good job

^.^ love, me.
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