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Reviews For: Needing Something
Travis C. Eckert 2006-10-02 . chapter 1
Good, only thing I noticed in some places "there" should be "their" other than that its just kind of a make you feel down poem.
fairytale failure 2006-09-16 . chapter 1
This one comes across as a little difficult to read.
lordelfy 2006-08-12 . chapter 1
Pretty neat, random but cool.
abs1247 2006-07-26 . chapter 1
i actually REALLY, REALLY liked this. and i'd like to say thank you for the review.. and to answer your question.. i LOVE AFI. great job, once again. xoxo abbylynn
burning in effigy 2006-07-24 . chapter 1
interesting format... seems sort of like a rant and almost like there are many voices conflicting with each other.

very nice :)
Porphyro's Madeline 2006-07-23 . chapter 1
wow, that is really cool. I love how you underlined some words and used others in bold, it had a great effect!
anewcreatureinchrist 2006-07-23 . chapter 1
Wow, I am blown away by this. WTG. GREAT Job!!
Cae -n- Kae 2006-07-22 . chapter 1
i love it. good job

^.^ love, me.
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