You're my hero. This is, simply put, brilliant.

I love the emphasis/bold/italics/etc.

For whatever reason, it really just gives even more feeling to it.

out of sheer curiosity, because I've always wanted to ask, what is your reasoning behind the emphasising and stuff? like the bold, italic, and etc? Sometimes it seems like it's called for in a poem, and other times it seems almost? random. In your case, I can't tell, so I was wondering if you did it purely for aesthetics or truly to give a feeling to a word?

So if you have any time, could you message me sometime? i realize it's kind of a no-no to ask a poet what he or she means but I really just couldn't help myself. what does the bolding/underlining/etc of words mean to you?

if you don't have an answer or don't want to answer, that's fine.

as for my review. obviously I couldn't understand where you were going with the formatting, so it distracted a bit for me. but I kind of like it too. I'm of two minds.

I like the story, but the format is a little too all over the place to me.. ti seemed like you were emphasizing words that didnt really need to be emphasized..

Well, I'm COMPLETELY surprised no one has reviewd this yet.

It's completely amazing. I promise to read more of your stuff.

Oh and by the way, thank you for the review on my poem.