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Windup Hopping Lederhosen
2006-07-25
ch 1,
Okay, come on over . . .

The cops came after you left. They were talking to my dad bout a robbery across the street but oh man, that was SCARY! Yet another close call . . .
Socially-Awkward
2006-07-24
ch 1,
I loved the way you worded this. It was very elegant, but you could also feel the pain. It sounds like you're going through a tough time. Hang in there.
THE LAST zHERO
2006-07-23
ch 1,
dottie, maybe? I dunno who it is
prophit
2006-07-22
ch 1,
Well done. I enjoyed the turmoil expressed in your poem. I think many of us have felt as you do.
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