This will probably eventually happen...I think N. Korea will bomb us first then Japan will bomb California and Hawaii(again) for revenge because they lost WW2. Then China will bomb Russia for becoming democratic after the Cold war and Russia and China will have their own little war. Then Europe will get involved and be split. And we'll be picking up our pieces when Cuba and Columbia launch more missiles at us. That's how I see It's going to happen! I'll read more! Any way Evil was here!

interesting idea. i'd like to see where you go with this. i like the jumpy quality, and you have a good voice here. and i like how vague everything starts out, only to pull into something so precise. has a feel of "vendetta" without drowning in it.

and i love the description you give of the nuclear winter. i'm hoping for more descriptions in the next bit (how many survivors... what is the world like now-besides weird weather- and so on). great start. i hope you continue on this!

sirius

p.s. the only criticism i can think of is that personally i wouldn't use the word "prolly" as you did, but that's really more a personal choice on my part, and it's the only criticism i can think of to balance out the plusses:P

Continue...I will be waiting to read on