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| heartbroken922 2007-09-23 ch 1,  | abusei love it. my favorite is the last stanza. great job and thanks for the review!! |
| sunday night sky 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abusethis is a beautiful piece. i love the rhyme, not too forced. thought provoking and lovely. keep writing :D |
| Leaving Here 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abusei like : We think of the good times and wish for their return.When we think of those smiles, we can’t help but yearn. and the last two lines. well, i loved the whole thing. it was great! keep writing!~Liz |
| onyxdragonflyy 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseHow we wish to forget certain things.. mainly the unkind ones, but it's a very hard task to do. As long as one learns from what has happened, good or bad, to them or from others, then at least the expirence was not a lesson wasted. My fav part are the last two lines, "Leaving only memories in its waketo remind us of our life’s mistake." |
| awannabewriter 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseNice reflective one. You make it sound so positive. |
| girl without wings 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is nice. I like the rhyming couplets. The rhythm is a bit jarring in places, but other than that, I have no complaints. Keep up the good work! |
| Meine Orange Aiwa 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseBah... Memories are not always pleasant indeed! So your goal is to have all of your works reviewed, eh? I'll be happy to contribute! |