A very rich poem - I couldn't think of any other adjectives to use!

It starts off with sensational descriptions, the sort that makes the reader slow down and ponder on every word; the 3rd stanza is a good transition, leading onto the sad ending. I can almost hear music in my head when I read through this piece..

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Ich bin heute zu belämmert, um englisch zu schreiben.

Das Gedicht gefällt mir ausgesprochen gut. Es hört sich richtig melodisch an. Außerdem erstaunt mich immer wieder, wie dir zu einem relativ engeschränkten Themenkreis immer wieder etwas Neues einfällt.

very emotional, like this poem a lot!

(wieder einmal) ein sehr gutes gedicht, demnächst mehr! Mein Computer ist so lahm. Da weiß man ein Buch zu schätzen, in dem man Blättern kann.

really nice. So far I havent come up with a single flaw in your writing. amazing. The last verse in astonishing. The usage of "kiss me, touch me, bed me" is vicious. I love the line "Bed me in my broken dreams" your poetry posseses the reader with its emotion. another favorite.

"no rose without a thorn" - I like that

Quite lyrical and poignant. Beautifully written. Really enjoyed reading this. Fantastic read.

Quite lyrical. Love the anaphora.

i liked the poignant twists: painful, sorrowful yet beautiful. i especially liked that last stanza... that wanting to be 'kissed' and 'touched', only to be laid on 'death'. quirky, astonishing, graceful. this is a nice read.

sorry for the late reviews... very limited time on the computer.

hey that was really good